導(dǎo)語(yǔ)：奧數(shù)網(wǎng)給同學(xué)們匯總了小學(xué)六年級(jí)英語(yǔ)作文范文及點(diǎn)評(píng)，希望同學(xué)們的英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)有所幫助。以下為六年級(jí)英語(yǔ)作文范文：

　　Zoom’s Weekend

　　Zoom had a busy weekend. On Saturday morning, he washed his clothes and went to a park. He did his homework and went fishing on Saturday afternoon. On Sunday morning, he cleaned his room and visited his grandparents. He played football and watch TV on Sunday afternoon. Zoom was too tired.

　　【要領(lǐng)點(diǎn)評(píng)】

　　寫(xiě)法：這篇習(xí)作是按時(shí)間順序記敘了Zoom的周末活動(dòng)。

　　時(shí)態(tài)：這篇文章可以用三種時(shí)態(tài)來(lái)寫(xiě)，由于本單元主要講的是一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)，所以我們采用一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)比較合適。

　　句型：主語(yǔ)+動(dòng)詞過(guò)去式+過(guò)去時(shí)間。

　　注意：活動(dòng)的相關(guān)表達(dá)法采用新舊知識(shí)結(jié)合的方法，但要注意動(dòng)詞過(guò)去式的拼寫(xiě)。