導語：奧數網給同學們匯總了小學英語作文范文及點評，希望同學們的英語學習有所幫助。以下為范文原文：

　　Jack is ten years old, though he is not doing well in study, he is a good child. He will never lie to his parents or make them angry. Some day, Jack makes a mistake, he forgets to notice his aunt the important information. His mother has told him many times. Jack is sad but he still tells his mother the truth. What a brave child.

　　杰克十歲了,雖然他不擅長學習,但是他是一個很好的孩子。他永遠不會欺騙他的父母或讓他們生氣。有一天,杰克犯了一個錯誤,他忘了通知他姑姑有關重要的信息。他的母親告訴他很多次了。杰克是傷心但他仍然告訴他母親真相。這是多么一個勇敢的孩子啊。